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Tuesday, February 22, 2011

Chocolate Chip Cookies

The chocolate chip cookie has specks of sugar.To make it sweater.The chocolate chip cookie has delicious chocolate freckles.Which make it to be yum.The colour of the biscuit is tawny coloured cookie.

When Mrs Garden was talking about the chocolate chip cookie.My mouth was watering.
The cookie was crunchy and crisp.When I bite into it.
The soft chocolate drops melted in my mouth and I wanted another one.
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4 comments:

  1. Mrs. BarksFebruary 23, 2011 at 7:56 PM

    Hi Saadiya!

    How exciting to have your own blog! I love that you remembered to use paragraphs! I can almost taste the cookie myself...you did such a good job describing it! In fact, I'm wondering why you didn't bring me one....you know how much I like chocolate!!!

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  2. SaadiyaMarch 2, 2011 at 6:11 PM

    hi Mrs Barks
    thank you for leaving me a comment.

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  3. HopeMarch 7, 2011 at 2:46 PM

    Hi saadiya
    I was amazed by your wonderful story. I would like you to make it more interesting.
    From Hope

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  4. SaadiyaMarch 14, 2011 at 10:07 AM

    Hi Hope

    Thank you for commenting on my chocolate chip cookie
    I really liked it.

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