The chocolate chip cookie has specks of sugar.To make it sweater.The chocolate chip cookie has delicious chocolate freckles.Which make it to be yum.The colour of the biscuit is tawny coloured cookie.
When Mrs Garden was talking about the chocolate chip cookie.My mouth was watering.
The cookie was crunchy and crisp.When I bite into it.
The soft chocolate drops melted in my mouth and I wanted another one.
Hi Saadiya!
ReplyDeleteHow exciting to have your own blog! I love that you remembered to use paragraphs! I can almost taste the cookie myself...you did such a good job describing it! In fact, I'm wondering why you didn't bring me one....you know how much I like chocolate!!!
hi Mrs Barks
ReplyDeletethank you for leaving me a comment.
Hi saadiya
ReplyDeleteI was amazed by your wonderful story. I would like you to make it more interesting.
From Hope
Hi Hope
ReplyDeleteThank you for commenting on my chocolate chip cookie
I really liked it.