Tuesday, March 26, 2013

The Old Man


Step by step as an old man took with that really cold breeze. With that oversized grey and black coat and the smell of the beach smelt soggy and a beachy smell. He was trudging along the sand. The grey hair and his long brown pants he had.

He was in his thought of his childhood  memories. The noise of seagulls scavenging and whispers and people talking? maybe his family was the crowd in the distance? Walking on the wet soggy sand. No one knows where that old man is from or where but maybe his memories are dragging him to his family, to his world of happiness

As the waves brushed towards his feet. He felt ache but he wouldn't stop he kept walking and walking. The weather started changing quickly with heavy rains but once again he didn't stop he kept walking.

Everyone was running everywhere but he stayed there in the heavy rain but possibly there was no sign. These two cute girls called Ella and Maria were really trying to help the old man but he heard nothing. The girls ran to him in the rain and pulled him two a side. The old man had shock and said “Ella Maria what are you doing here” we're here with grandma and you. You remember?  

The old man said “wheres your grandma”  “barbecuing for us” they replied! Grandma was worried where grandpa had gone in the cold but when he went to her she smiled and that's how they meet after that time. But then the rain had went and the sun rises back up and thats the story of the old man getting lost in his thought.



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