Monday, October 29, 2012

Lily's Dream

“Come on pack you bags” said Mum, We have to leave because dads waiting for us. You know his anger! Do we have to go? says lily. Obviously because it is dads surprise. Now come on.

Dad is so excited that he mostly takes our whole house. Oh seriously does dad have to take so many thing. Mum says “do you think I know where he's taking us for our holiday”. Lilly keeps playing her video game. Wow says mum. What are beautiful beach. Lilly says “hey that Pt England School reserve”.

Dad says “I know, We will be doing fishing and finding food here and will live here for three days”. But how are we going to swim across the other side of the river to check some stuff out. Says Lily “ Yeah she is right” Said Mum. “There's no boats and plus it is really deep down there”.

First lets put our tents up and get the fire going. Lilly goes dose the tent. “Read the instruction dear” says Mum. Lilly says “ I'm so cool to read the instruction”. So she seriously does the tent looking like a tangled wire. Help shouts Lilly. Mum and dad come rushing towards them and says “dear are you aright!” So they all help with the tent.

So they get everything ready. “all set to go says dad. Yummy says lilly a barbecue tonight. After they finished eating. They all went inside the tent all talked and went to sleep. There were some noises of these strange things. Lilly was so not afraid to go outside and see what it was. It was a ghost with red eyes. OMG!!! she shouted but they were all sleeping.

Suddenly she fainted right there. Mum woke up and looked for lilly. What she was sleeping in the sand Said mum. She splashed water on her. she acted all weird and really different that she was trying to escape the beach. Once when mum and dad went looking for food. She had escaped the beach. Mum and dad came back. Lilly where are you there said. Dad looked around the whole beach but she wasn't there.

They had packed their bags and were about to leave. Until the saw this girl on the sand sitting alone, Mum thought she was Lilly and she went up to her. But she was the ghost staring at mum. She then realised that is was lilly’s dream... She was so scared and began to force dad if they could leave. Dad agreed and they went home...

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